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Post by Rouch on Apr 7, 2006 18:48:49 GMT -5
I ran out of character's on the posting so I decided I'm splitting the thread. The actual story "What a Day" can by found on the other thread - this is were you shall post your comments. :3
In other words - read there come to this thread and post. Thank ya kindly!
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Post by ayita on Apr 7, 2006 18:59:06 GMT -5
Hehe. And I thought Beni was cool. -shoves aside and makes a beeline to Uncouth-
Whee. xD I worship Uncouth, the all powerful...harlot.
Sshh, we can actually, finally, call a wolf a harlot now, Aye Rouch? xD Ohyes, fun times.
Oh yeah - That story was awesome. Like I said on Dogproxy, all my stories go kablooey. Suffice to say, I need to stick with roleplaying and not short story writing.
Unlike you. <3
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Post by Rouch on Apr 7, 2006 19:03:05 GMT -5
XD Hehe, I love Uncouth. I really might have to make her a character on here, psh like I don't already have enough.
She's not a harlot ... yet. >3 She probably will be by the end of the story though!
I'm not that great, I usually just write without a plot in mind. x3 Which means most of the time my stories ramble on for pages without really saying anything.
<3 Thanks though.
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Post by RANDOMNESS on Apr 7, 2006 19:30:33 GMT -5
I thought the female was my character for a second there *sighs a relief* The personality is too scary to be my evil little badass girl.
Well thoughtout there Rouchie^^
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Post by Rouch on Apr 7, 2006 19:32:33 GMT -5
x3 Hehe, your character was the insperation for Uncouth. I just ... leached off it and doubled it okay maybe trippled.
:3 Thank ya kindly.
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Post by RANDOMNESS on Apr 7, 2006 19:36:00 GMT -5
*shivers with the though of Senka actually being nice* Something has to happen with Karinek... she's much too shy around others. That reminds me... Outcasts.
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Post by Rouch on Apr 8, 2006 21:47:19 GMT -5
Chapter Two added :3 Not sure I like it as much as the first, but it's good enough I guess.
The plot thickens >D
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Post by Ziku on Apr 8, 2006 22:12:19 GMT -5
0_0 DELGNAT HOW COULD YOU!
Delgnat: Oh come on! He's worth a lot in the pack!
Woncerful story! Benedict is going down with Kein and nothin is gunna stop the Beta!
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Lupin
Boots
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Post by Zoe on Apr 9, 2006 12:35:51 GMT -5
Awesome story. ^-^ Hmm.. I need to get Theo up and running.
Theo: -grunt-
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Post by Rouch on Apr 9, 2006 13:13:57 GMT -5
n_n; I'm glad you like it! I was worried I hadn't gotten Delgnat's personalty right, quite a realif that you aren't yelling at me.
=3 Thank ya very much, it was fun to write!
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Post by Ziku on Apr 9, 2006 13:15:06 GMT -5
Nope! You got 'im just right! If not, go look at his bio. I think Toksyc updated his personality a bit with smarts. ^^
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Post by ayita on Apr 12, 2006 16:44:56 GMT -5
Dundundun. The plot thickens. Hehehe.
Aw man, I just read scrolled down and realized you had wrote that too, Rouch. Copy wolf. x3
I really like it! Even better then the first chapter. This chapter reminds me of the kind of stuff you would read Rouch, with all the bodies and stuff and the killing slowly. Whaa-- Stephen King, yo. >D
Yeah anyway. Uncouth is growing on me even more.
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Post by Rouch on Apr 13, 2006 9:24:40 GMT -5
xD I didn't think I described that part all to well, glad you like it.
=o Chapter Three! And a new character! I love Obtuse, such an idiotic bloodthirsty wolf <3
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Lobo
Bite Me
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Post by Kai on Apr 13, 2006 20:47:01 GMT -5
lol. yes. Like so many others. ^^ Awesome chapter. Can't wait for four! -stranges- WHERE IS FOUR?!
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Post by RANDOMNESS on Apr 14, 2006 13:27:11 GMT -5
The plot thickens!!!
Senka: *stares at Uncouth* I see how we have a resemblance...
Me: I told you!
Senka: *bares teeth* Shut your mouth, RANDOM! Or would you rather I shut it for you?
Me: *zips lips in fear*
Senka: Damn fool that you are, I'm surprised why you even shown your face here.
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