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Post by .Tourniquet. on May 17, 2006 18:52:00 GMT -5
“Get up, Shadow,” the white wolf with dark green eyes nudged his sister with the back of his paw. Her eyes trembled, then opened a crack, and then finally snapped open in surprise. In no time at all she was on her feet and crouching to the ground to leap onto none other than her brother. She licked is face without a word as he tumbled to the ground and returned the affection. “It’s only me,” he said, after he caught his breath. “What’s the sudden licking about?” The two were now standing and Shadow’s eyes were still wide with surprise but had a little hint of sadness in them as well. She hadn’t seen him in years. Perhaps he just lost track of the time they had been apart. “Are you kidding?” She said finally. She took a few steps forward to bury her nose in his neck fur. “Halo, it’s been years! I’ve missed you so much.”
First 3 paragraphs of my new story "Wolf Falls" I'm still switching around what it's about so I won't get into that. But what do you guys think about it so far? Would it be a story you would want to read?
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Post by Jave on May 17, 2006 18:58:37 GMT -5
Ohh. Neat! :D
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Post by Toksyc on May 17, 2006 18:59:21 GMT -5
Are you using names from here? XD
I like it though =3 has a good start
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Post by .Tourniquet. on May 17, 2006 19:03:10 GMT -5
Not trying to. I made the white wolf Halo because he's white and I might change his eyes to yellow and he's just a sweetheart.
And Shadow will have her name changed later in the story. She gets renamed by someone that she hardly even knows and she has to keep it.
But thanks you two all the same. ^^
I think it's going a bit too fast, so I'll make it slow down in the next paragraphs and do some explaining.
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Post by Rouch on May 17, 2006 19:04:16 GMT -5
=O The synopsis you just gave sounds awesome.
As for the story itself - it's sounds interesting. =3 I'd read it.
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Post by .Tourniquet. on May 17, 2006 19:09:35 GMT -5
Oh, crap. I didn't think I gave out that much. u.u Darn...
Thanks, though. ^^
I need eight names. Doesn't matter if it's male or female.
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Post by RavenHolm on May 17, 2006 19:20:15 GMT -5
I like it so far. -is thinking of starting up writing again- If you seek names, RANDOMNESS'll give you alot. -----> Proof<-----
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Post by .Tourniquet. on May 17, 2006 19:21:30 GMT -5
Whoa. OO I'll use some of those then. ^^;
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Post by RavenHolm on May 17, 2006 19:23:04 GMT -5
Might want to ask first, just to make sure.
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Post by .Tourniquet. on May 17, 2006 19:25:17 GMT -5
I think I only used like two. The others I got ideas from. Here are the names that I took: Hint, Ivory.
The others are either variations, or just got ideas.
But I'll ask her anyway.
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