Post by Zinerva on Jun 13, 2006 9:31:23 GMT -5
this is the beginning of a story that i was writing. it is about a vampire and a werewolf, the two greatest enemies, who fall in love. well in their regular forms, they date and continue to fall for each other, but when the are both in their second nature forms, they fight each other and don't really know who each other is. so, the 1st 2 chapters are about the 2 people, Jira and Marrok. Marrok is actually an undeveloped character of mine, and i home to develop him into a character on either of the 3 sites i role play on i only have the 1st chapter typed, so here it is:
Two hearts, One Soul
Chapter one
She was rather good at what she was. Seeing that she was this person, or monster in her words, for decades. Even though she disagreed with this " life style ", she had perfected it. She had no choice but to live and bear with it. She had an adventurous personality and a surprisingly comical sence of humor for the type of being she was.Years had taught her about her way of life. Always living in the shadow of night, being careful not to linger in the rays of the sun to long.
She had and life long thirst for blood. She was hungry for it always. It had never driven her to murder, taking enough to keep her alive and satisfy her thirst. She had figured out the most perfect ways to acquire the priceless ' red mercury '. She would sneak into houses, hospital rooms, or blood banks late at night and do her business, quietly and quickly. Cutting small slits into veins and letting the blood flow freely. After she was done, she would rub spit into the cut to heal it quickly.
Her eyes and ears were keen. Even though she was blind in her left eye, she still had incredible eye sight. She was able to see the tiniest detail and hear the smallest of sounds.She was able to run with incredible speeds. Thanks to the ' rich ' blood line, she was able to make a 30 minute trip into a 5 minute sprint. The name for the remarkable running is called flitting. She was unbelievably strong as well. She was able to lift more than a n average sized body builder, but never showed signs hidden muscles.
She had a well developed body, but an unusually pale complexion. She was rather beautiful, despite her pale skin. She had a perfectly shaped body, curves and slopes where they should be. Her breast were full, around size D, and her body slim but not illy thin.Her hair was shoulder length with long layers and was the color of purple fire ( you know, red but with a purple tint. ) She fashioned it wavy and let her bangs hang over her left eye. Her eyes where different colors. Her right one green hazel and the left, a ghostly whitish blue. Her facial features were soft, cheeks fitting and her lips full and naturally rosy red. Her nails were long, strong and sharpened at the tips. She had curved scars on the fleshy tips of every finger.
The scar on her fingers are what signified her for what she was, a vampire.
so, what do you think? do you think i should continue, i mean, i already have 4 chapters written, but should i type them and have people read them? please, i want your opinions.
Two hearts, One Soul
Chapter one
She was rather good at what she was. Seeing that she was this person, or monster in her words, for decades. Even though she disagreed with this " life style ", she had perfected it. She had no choice but to live and bear with it. She had an adventurous personality and a surprisingly comical sence of humor for the type of being she was.Years had taught her about her way of life. Always living in the shadow of night, being careful not to linger in the rays of the sun to long.
She had and life long thirst for blood. She was hungry for it always. It had never driven her to murder, taking enough to keep her alive and satisfy her thirst. She had figured out the most perfect ways to acquire the priceless ' red mercury '. She would sneak into houses, hospital rooms, or blood banks late at night and do her business, quietly and quickly. Cutting small slits into veins and letting the blood flow freely. After she was done, she would rub spit into the cut to heal it quickly.
Her eyes and ears were keen. Even though she was blind in her left eye, she still had incredible eye sight. She was able to see the tiniest detail and hear the smallest of sounds.She was able to run with incredible speeds. Thanks to the ' rich ' blood line, she was able to make a 30 minute trip into a 5 minute sprint. The name for the remarkable running is called flitting. She was unbelievably strong as well. She was able to lift more than a n average sized body builder, but never showed signs hidden muscles.
She had a well developed body, but an unusually pale complexion. She was rather beautiful, despite her pale skin. She had a perfectly shaped body, curves and slopes where they should be. Her breast were full, around size D, and her body slim but not illy thin.Her hair was shoulder length with long layers and was the color of purple fire ( you know, red but with a purple tint. ) She fashioned it wavy and let her bangs hang over her left eye. Her eyes where different colors. Her right one green hazel and the left, a ghostly whitish blue. Her facial features were soft, cheeks fitting and her lips full and naturally rosy red. Her nails were long, strong and sharpened at the tips. She had curved scars on the fleshy tips of every finger.
The scar on her fingers are what signified her for what she was, a vampire.
so, what do you think? do you think i should continue, i mean, i already have 4 chapters written, but should i type them and have people read them? please, i want your opinions.
